I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Thursday, 14 March 2013

Similes And Metaphors

The creek of the door sounded as if someone was screaming. The room was dark, just as I expected it to. I stepped into the room and shut the door behind me. Even though I had my eyes open, the dark room made it seem like I had them closed. Looking for the light switch made it seem I was wondering aimlessly through a dark maze. I placed my hands on the walls and started to slide them across in search for the switch. My hands moved smoothly across the walls like a swan on a lake. A bump. My hands found the switch but when I felt the bump it was as if a car crashed into a tree. I flicked the switch and light sprang into the room, I used my hands to cover my eyes like a vampire.

I jumped into my bed and the bed sprang me up on impact like a trampoline.  I wrapped myself in my blanket as if I was a caterpillar in a cocoon.  I closed my eyes and slept like a sloth.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ram
    Great post. You have certainly nailed the learning intention of using similes in your post. Could you perhaps have come with a more interesting title for your work?

    Stephanie

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