I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Thursday, 4 July 2013


Prince Jack stared into the grassy meadows and watched strips of grass move towards the direction of the blowing wind. He sighed and looked deeper into meadows. He remembered the tower, Rapunzel's tower. Prince Jack knows the path, but his limited courage had stopped him from proceeding. 'What kind of prince waits around doing nothing?' he said to himself. Prince Jack took a step, then another, and before he knew it he was running to the tower. He couldn't see it, but he knows the path like the blade of his sword, which he carelessly left at home. 

Rapunzel looked out her tower, into cloud covered setting sun. The sky was a light red colour, her second favourite colour next to yellow. Yellow was her favourite because it was her hair colour, but it is understandable. 'Rapunzel, let down your hair!' she heard a familiar voice exclaim, she looked down and saw Prince Jack looking into her eyes, smiling. 'You came back,' she said happily.
'Of course I have, my love,' he started, 'I couldn't leave you in this old tower for the rest of your life.' 
'You're, getting me out?' she asked, curiosity in her voice. 
'Of course, I just need you to jump, don't worry I shall catch you,' he explained. Rapunzel was conflicted, she was too scared to jump, but she wanted to get out of this filthy tower. She took a deep breath and jumped. 

Wind rushed through her extremely long golden hair, she had her eyes closed, she landed on two extended arms. Her eyes opened and Prince Jack was looking at her smiling. She grinned and gave him a kiss on the lips. 

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